"You can gleam a lot about your character by looking at the people rushing to your rescue. I could be very confident in my position, but once only Proctor, Rev and some other choice grifters come to my help, I would assume I did something wrong along the way"VSoyBoy
I do think the writing is good, but it does seem pretty longwinded. Personally, the interactions between characters seem fine, but it's the long soliloquys about the heart condition that drag on and on and on.
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